by monkeyfish
This is getting interesting and my cock is definitely getting stiff. So looking forward to seeing how things develop, although I'l pretty sure that these two are going to be having some very steamy action together!
I'm enjoying your writing and like it that you're taking your time to set the scene.
I dunno if anyone ever returns to a comment section here but hey, thanks fellas. I appreciate the optimism (and your kind reviews letting me briefly crack the top fifty in the 30-days gay top list!), as it has encouraged me to get the second part to already halfway-ish done. I hope you're as receptive to the next chapter as this one, since it doesn't veer straight (heh) into depravity or decadence, the hypno and voyeur stuff here is kinda the gateway kinks that lead to introspection and compatibility. But don't worry! There will be bodily fluids!
I love this story. I read your comment and I love that you're taking the time to build up the sexual chemistry and tension. It's sexy AF. Definitely ready for Pt 2