All Comments on 'From Out of the Haze'

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MaxOgdenMaxOgden10 months ago

If this isn't the best, hottest, most erotic story I have ever read then someone please show me that one next because I don't think it exists.

I loved this story from start to finish. The main character isn't some virgin with cracked voice and no moves, yet he's not some cocky asshole either. The setup with his sister was well done, the clues obvious but perfectly placed to lead to the smoking hot climax.

Speaking of climaxes...wow I didn't see that one coming at all. I won't give it away but it had me stunned and I never fall for tricks in narratives.

Well done. Can't wait to start the next chapter. 5 stars from me and that's because they don't go to 10.

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