All Comments on 'From Rehearsal to Reality'

Liked your story. Where is the Sister in law please put her in the second part

A man captured by aliens along with his wife and sister - in - law is given to Captain Deva Villant, as a poisoned chalice. Under punishment decreed by the Planet's ruler Lord Bain for her father's rebellion, Captain Deva Villant must submit to public humiliation: sex with the captive Albert. Regarded as an inferior being, Albert is treated with contempt by Captain Deva Villant until her public humiliation causes Captain Deva Villant to realize Albert's potential as a partner--in bed at least.

Wifetheif once again uses the literary genre to express a subtle point about the evolution of a relationship: from subjugation to equality. If Wifetheif were to continue the story would Albert end up as the boss?

The only other story I thought makes this point so well is a little recognized made - for - TV movie BETWEEN LOVE AND HONOR, about an undercover operative's relationship with his team.

I'd love to see this story continued as well as storys being told from the wifes and sister in laws perspectives

Please continue