All Comments on 'From Soccer to Sucker Pt. 09'

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FibaroFibaro10 months agoAuthor

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

How are you 9 parts into this story and still haven't done anything? And how do you think this is a good advertisement for your patreon? Your content barely qualifies as adult. In other slow-burn romance stories, there's at least some progress before now. You can't be 10+ pages in and have one of your 2 main characters still hating the other.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

It's getting a bit monotonous now. Started really well but shouldn't there be some real action or changes?

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawa10 months ago

I am fascinated by the subject of history, I was very excited by the first episodes, but now, although thrilling fragments, it drags on like old chewing gum ... begins to lose its attractiveness and charm.

Now I can see that Jake is becoming mentally, mentally, or even emotionally, he lacks even the will to fight for himself. Valeria, although at the beginning seemed to be a very dominant person, active and thrilling, only uses the advantage she has in photos, videos and where is her bravery? So far it's just panties and Jake's shaved body and photos in a dress, everything hung in space or maybe in the void? There is only a fight about who hates whom more, Valeria Jake or Jake Valeria, and somewhere there is some other feeling or emotion between them. I hope that the next parts will show the real personality of both Valeria and Jake. I am waiting with great interest and great impatience for the next adventures of Jake and Valeria.

Best regards, Fibaro, SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📝👩🏻❤️🧒🏻👸🏻⚽

Jestem zafascynowany tematem historii, bardzo Mnie emocjonowały pierwsze odcinki ale teraz choć porywające fragmenty to ciągnie się to jak stara guma do żucia... zaczyna tracić swoją atrakcyjność i zauroczenie.

Teraz widzę że Jake staje się upadłym psychicznie, mentalnie czy nawet uczuciowo brak w nim nawet chęci walki o siebie samego. Valeria zaś choć na początku wydawała się bardzo dominującą osobą, aktywną i porywającą to jedynie wykorzystuje przewagę jaką ma w zdjęciach, filmikach a gdzie jej waleczność? Jak do tej pory to tylko majteczki i ogolone ciałko Jake oraz zdjęcia w sukience, wszystko zawisło w przestrzeni a może w próżni? Jedynie jest walka kto kogo bardziej nienawidzi, Valeria Jake czy na Jake Valerię a gdzieś tam przebija się jakieś inne uczucie czy emocje pomiędzy nimi. Mam nadzieję że następne części ukażą prawdziwą osobowość zarówno Valerii jak i Jake'a. Z wielkim zainteresowaniem i wielką niecierpliwością czekam na kolejne losy Jake i Valerii.

Pozdrawiam Serdecznie Fibaro, SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📝👩🏻❤️🧒🏻👸🏻⚽

kindzazakindzaza2 months ago

Interesting story but too much emphasis on cowards.

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