All Comments on 'From the Flea Market'

Dear Author, This 'short' story was a well written but a terrible tease! YOU MUST FINISH WHAT YOU HAVE STARTED! Get to work, complete this tale and make me happy. I'm a selfish reader and I want satisfaction.

Did you understand me? Thanks for the nibble and best of luck wrapping this one up.......quickly.

jntiques/john This was the first demand I have ever made to an author. I apologize if I was offensive but I truly enjoyed your contribution young lady.

Teasing, but not satisfying

Good start, keep it going.

Really good. Very expressive. I don't think that Olivia "took advantage" of Dominic. I think that they just came together for mutual satisfaction, and to fulfill their respective needs

I think you have the basis of an extensive set of stories here. Relationships, travel, perceptions of others of their relationship, family and more. Keep going please.