All Comments on 'Front Royal'

by Virginiawild

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Mars_InamorataMars_Inamorataabout 6 years ago
Bit of a shame

I loved the beginning and it really had potential to be great. But by the end I felt like everything was rushed so quickly and the sex was out of place. Honestly, it was a little dissapointing how Jodi immediately thought of sex and experimenting once she heard about Sylvia’s love. “Barbara took me in her arms while I pondered eating Sylvia’s pussy.” ??? Ok? It was just weird considering how this story had genuine moments in here that were ultimately ruined by the crude language and motives.

redlion75redlion75about 6 years ago
Uh

Little house on the prairie was written by Laura ingalls wilder who was not a lesbian

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yes it was.

Yes it was written by LIW. Who doesn't know that?

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
not bad

I thought this was a good story, not too short and not to long

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Lol

Lol I grew up in that town lol

Bridget69Bridget69about 6 years ago
Love thy neighbors

In this case, urbanization clearly has its advantages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great !!

Very good !! It is not a typical compliment, i mean it. The plot was good, the story was well written. Now it is time Sylvia and her friends to be out of the town for a while for a reason and Jodi Lee to be all alone with her daughter... sleeping in the same bed a cold stormy night... Their minds full of hot thoughts for each other but also full of taboos they have to fight... Just an idea... Now if you enrich the story with some hot tribbing , i will not complain ! LOL

TLIF (Trib, Lesbian Incest Fan)

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