All Comments on 'Front Window'

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I particularly enjoyed the way the story was layed out and flowed in a smooth manner. Easy reading. ******.

Sounds like a day in lots of neighborhoods. At least this one had a guy willing to do the right thing . The messenger often is the bad guy . The other sad reality is the arrogance of the cheater that would use their own house. She obviously was at work so cheap guy could spring for a room . Only regret for this story is the guy got away without at least getting a beating. All friends working in big companies are getting laid the most in their lives . Most are married , very sad but it always the one talking how great their hubby is and how happily married they are . Maybe many do believe they can separate the cheating and marriage as woman anyway . Men are like animals and no mind when it comes to pussy just like most animals in the jungle. My friend that is feast on his coworkers needs for younger strange cock has one do happily married with her kids around his age . Hubby hunts for a few long weekends , two golf trips and travels for work every quarter. As that goes he takes the wife in every room in the house. He loves the kitchen table , hubby favorites chair, sofa , dining room table, her bed , the bathrooms , and has fucked her on each of her three kids bed . Twisted but he loves it . He lays her on dining table and sits where her hubby would and eats her pussy and ass long before he fucks her and tells her on the holidays when everyone is home eating around the table think of me taking you right there. He’s twisted and gets off on taking the married or dating ones . He said he was taking her ass in sons bed that was younger than him flat hand in middle of back pulling hair to have head look at the pic of the family saying what would they think of mommy taking this young cock up her tight married mommy ass. He’s a sadistic bastard but treat them all like gold outside of the fucking . He also calls his daily e we park dsy ending blow jobs a gift to the hubby’s . For me I can’t condone cheating. It’s totally emasculating, disrespectful and destructive to a person you love and the whole family but it does make for a good story as a fiction without any people being hurt

Good story using the idea from the movie.

5-stars.

I like the idea of basing stories on old classics like Rear Window.

Great story. Well written and not over the top.

Nice.

A new angle to a known theme.

Very nicely done Mr. Just_Words.

Remember to mind your knees.

Top ratings from me.

Horrible things happen in real life if cheating is discovered...i tell you even i am not sure what ill do but i know blowing both their brain's out and regret later is possible.

A good story, l can see you borrowed your inspiration from the Hitchcock movie Rear Window. It worked well.

Scores 4/5

Your characters felt so intimately real as did the situations and the processes in which they dealt with them . You even had a tad bit of subtle humor in your character and his interrelationship with Nurse Pain . Excellent look into the human mind . Five stars and a standing ovation

Excellent. Again!

Thank you for gifting your immense talent for storytelling to us.

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Another great story as only J_W can tell it. The joys of in home physical therapy and navigating simple tasks with a damn walker makes me think you have some personal experience.

Good and creative tale i enjoyed deeply. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Reality.

Wonderful.

Chronicles of a man who sat and watched with a good sight and a good ear.

5

Good story thanks for it. I was thinking nurse pain would reward him for doing so well.

A good story from a different perspective.

Well written and entertaining with our MC trying to figure out what to do and how to tell his neighbor. This could very well be a true story happening somewhere right now, who knows? While I really love a good BTB story with the male seducer getting his just deserts with the husband setting them both up for their punishment this story did well and I forced myself to give it 5 stars.

Nicely done. Unique, well developed storyline. Readable. Just enough character development to get a feel for the MC and Chris. Nice touch with the quote from the counseling sessions to provide solid support for the divorce decision.

Delicious.

I could read a whole series of Henry Bennett's just stumbling on other people's improprieties.

Great story, J_W! Thanks!

Nice story. Parking in broad daylight on a regular basis is pretty clueless, but probably happens. People are dumb.

Loved the story. I can empathize with the mc as I had a knee replacement a few months ago. One correction- the worst part of the therapy is not getting the knee to bend at a 45 degree angle, but rather getting to 0 degrees. (straight out) Took me months. I too looked out my front window at the goings on in the neighborhood. Would've been more interesting if I had neighbors like the mc. All I saw were dogs, the mailman, and the guy across the street sitting on his porch. However I had a straying wife for years. Wish my neighbors would've clued me in.

Very good, thankfully not "descriptive" sex scenes. All his fault for getting a knee replacement. LOL

Creative. Nice LW homage to Rear Window.

You put together another good one here, no frills but well described events that probably are happening all over the world as we read this, the pain of being cheated on is real, the need to get revenge is high in the beginning, but normally wears off after a while, if it doesn’t that’s when it gets bad , normally for the poor sap who was cheated on, as he gets even but does the wrong thing at and to the wrong person, nice story

Still good

Yeah, Mr writer, but that's why we are here to read **fiction**. So we can see revenge. If we wanted to see victimization of good men by shitty women and the injustice system they created, we have real life for that, no need for fictional stories. 3 stars, and the only reason is because Rear Window is one of my favorite movies so i'll add a star for the sake of nostalgia.

Great read, great story. Thank you for your imagination and letting us share part of it

4 stars - I like the story, BUT it could have worked out a bit differently, if the neighbour just set up a front door video camera and dropped off copies of videos and pictures anonymously for the aggrieved spouses.

This is the way.

Wonder what would have happened had the MC confronted Jenny immediately. Would she have ended it, and Chris gone on happily unaware? Even so, she would probably cheat again.

Very good story, J_W, thanks a lot. Were it me, in my house in my neighborhood, I would have just kept my mouth shut about both the cheating women. I don’t know most of my neighbors well but I know them well enough to know I don’t like them and I certainly wouldn’t go out of my way to involve myself in any of their business. Good story, though, I did enjoy it.

Wow, your story really struck home. I have had 10 knee operations and 2 knee replacements. All on the same knee. Lots of treatment time and sitting looking out the window for activity. Thanks for sharing your story.

@ Anonymous - That scares me! I'm probably getting knee replacements down the road and I want to delay it for as long as I can. Knowing it is probably coming was the inspiration behind this story. That led to the Rear Window idea and that led to seeing cheating instead of a murder. Funny how the mind works.

My mother had both her knees replaced in her mid 80s give or take a few years between them. Both times she was back to normal within weeks of having them replaced. Others I know had the same and took ages. At 90 my mother could still do the full splits, get her leg above her head and bending at the waist put the flat of her hands on the floor with no effort. Back in the 1950s When she was on the stage she used to hold onto her leg above her head and then, just fell to the stage floor doing the splits in one motion. Apparently the whole audience used to groan. It was nothing to her. Shame they did not have Youtube back then.

As to cheaters, I would bust everyone of them with no conscience of doing it. They have no respect of their spouse or their marriage vows and if they have children no respect for them either. Then they say it "Just happened", no they let it happen. They took their eye off their marriage ball.

Good homage to the Hitchcock classic. Thoroughly entertaining story. You are one of the best on here. BardnotBard

Ughh! A busy body story.

Lol at prior commenter. It is a LW twist on Rear Window, the classic Alfred Hitchcock movie. Chuckled at the Peyton Place reference. Then when I read the Sodom and Gomorrah comment, damn near split my sides in laughter. Good story. Sadly this crap happens all to often across many neighborhoods. Jenny was banging a co-worker for probably months if not longer. Sally was an recidivist slut with a neighbor. Jenny with her 'compartmentalization' has psych issues. Wives who cheat tend to have longer affairs and develop emotional ties. Jenny acted more like a cheating husband with her ability to compartmentalize. 5 stars.

"Sociopath or narcissist might apply, but selfish and deceptive certainly do." It's probably a spectrum from individualist, egotism, narcissist, solipsist, sociopath, and psychopath.

Great story. I never saw any thing, other than traffic, during my rehab.

Interesting story, have seen the Hitchcock movie in question more than a dozen times.

Since this story is narrated by a witness, we don't learn too much about the wronged husband's thoughts, his actions are relatable.

The MC, the bystander, brings up an argument that is used very often, unfortunately as far as I'm concerned. It's the "she (he) loves you" remark, referring to the cheater. To me its unfathomable to characterize the feelings for another person as love if there is no respect, consideration, commitment, loyalty and truthfulness (especially about the "biggies"). But anyhow, so called love is not enough to sustain a happy marriage. Isn't the right to pursue happiness not even anchored in the American constitution or bill of rights?

It's strange how certain fringe groups of society and their advocates demand, that they are never even made uncomfortable or get their feelings hurt- or else. Still a lot of people, if not to say females in most cases, demand from cheated on husbands not to feel about their situation and the cheater the way they do; instead they are supposed to feel and think the way some outsider tells them to. The double standards and hypocrisy these days are staggering.

Nontheless, thanks JW for sharing your story, it's very much appreciated!

WISDOM: Revenge sounds good in fiction, in the rea world it usually does not work out well. Another 5

Yeah, revenge may make some people feel better but it’s seldom results in the recipient feeling all that bad, so unless it’s a drastic thing it’s probably totally wasted. Unfortunately for me my idea of revenge is usually so violent it would no doubt put me in prison ‘for the duration’, so I’ve learned to just walk away, keep on walking if that’s what it takes. Keeps me out of more trouble than I can handle. 😎. Thanks for a great story, J_W, I love it.

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