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by Feotakahari

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Cricket88Cricket88about 13 years ago
.....

you have an exquisite way with story telling, a wonderous tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great!

I like the unusual and ambiguous ending.

The sex is a little lacking in detail, however.

AvaritiaAvaritiaover 8 years ago
In love…

Know what I like about ur stories so far…? It's that they're like reading poetry and they hold a certain tune like song lyrics, though, without music... You don't try to force the image of a character or their world into your readers skulls like they should see it as you do but yet there's enough detail to form a picture…

Honestly I find your writing style beautiful and fasinating and I certainly hope you continue writing for a long time…

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Lover of cute and fluffy stories. Reluctant writer of dark ones. (Cute is so hard to write!) Unashamed Benthamite. Pro-lamia advocate, because they deserve cuddles, not steppies.