by Feotakahari
I like the unusual and ambiguous ending.
The sex is a little lacking in detail, however.
Know what I like about ur stories so far…? It's that they're like reading poetry and they hold a certain tune like song lyrics, though, without music... You don't try to force the image of a character or their world into your readers skulls like they should see it as you do but yet there's enough detail to form a picture…
Honestly I find your writing style beautiful and fasinating and I certainly hope you continue writing for a long time…