All Comments on 'Frost on the Pumpkin'

Great story!!! I especially liked the plot twists - very well written.

Fantastic story from one end to the other.

..however, here are a few edits you should make. :)

The poem? Not a limerick.

Hester Prynne, not Prim

Leukemia, not.. whatever spelling that was. :)

"worn work clothes", not "warn work cloths"

"The since of her made me realize..." 'since'?

"Rare breed of woman", not "rear breed"

"While Mariah laid their" -- "there"

"insure that my seed" -- 'ensure'

"Grandma insuring that" -- again, 'ensuring'

Blue, this is a good entry into the Halloween Contest. Enjoyed it and good luck.

great story, loved the attention to detail. Fantastic work Old_Blue

One of the best! Very well written, with only a few minor editing errors. Keep up the good work!

Great story well not over done

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it although it was a little long. Thanks for sharing.

Loved the story.

Outstanding story and very well written. The author should be proud of this writing. Loved it Keep up the good work.

this was long winded and tedious.

Good story but not enough sex. This is an erotic site.