All Comments on 'Frustration Ch. 07'

by DOMann1959

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widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 6 years ago
Cuckold?

loved your story, every chapter had me running to the bathroom to relieve my self. Anyway it was good except for the last chapter where you turned those people into a bunch of loonies. Why in havens name would she want to have sex with Nelson? If she had her husband. her father and her son to do that. And why would she want to get pregnant just to play a joke on Nelson? Don't make sense. She could teach her husband what she taught her son and have a amazing sex life with him. If it was because of the size, she could have dumped her fathers puny cock and her husband and moved in with her son and daughter. The daughter was willing to share him by now. Wish you had stayed with the original script. Also, you shouldn't be bringing in past affairs if you're not going to eleborate on them, that kills the momentum of the plot to the story, because your mind goes wandering wanting to know what happened, only to be left wondering about it, and you had quite a few in here. Again wish you had stayed with the story line it was amazing.

rodryder44rodryder44about 6 years ago
Merry-go-round

I agree with Widowedidiot that Pam and Nelson made no sense to the story. I thought Harley and Matt were the same size, but maybe Matt had an inch (very important) on his Gramps. I was curious about what Matt's lawyer might have said about creating a false identity. I would think this would violate legal ethics, but would have been good reading. For entertainment this was a good story. "5" stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Continue, Please.

Continue, Please.

JagnagJagnagabout 5 years ago
Far too ridicules to even put into words

That has to be the sadest story ever written on here.

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