by lfullback
Tension & tenderness galore ! Queasy inducing in tandem with seducing. The author has 'crazy talent' to burn & fear.
Combining the stimulation of a Gay Male story with Incest was great idea and made for a 5 star effort
A very different twist. Well done... And unlike most of the stories here you can even spell...
Clever, funny and worth rubbing one out for! A great idea made into a great story!
BUT I LIKED IT, there was a lot too it. What a brother, can she turn him?. This is the kind of story, that could turn out great.GOOD LUCK KIDS..........LAROC
I liked it a lot! A little sexual experimentation with a twist.
Title didn't fit the bulk of the narrative IMO. Made me think this was pure stroke when it actually has some substance mixed in. Perhaps title was being cheeky but tough to do as most stories here are very literal to their title. Hmm.
Felt it warranted a 5 for the concept and not going absurdly cliche with it. Would be interested in seeing it done either more seriously or more wildly just to see if being firmly in one camp or the other would have improved it overall.
Based on the title and description I figured this was going to be a pretty lame read with no lead up and poor writing, but I quickly became interested and couldn't stop reading until the end. I'd love it if you wrote a sequel.
5 Stars.
The sister seems like a reckless oversexed bitch and not nice at all. I feel as if she took advantage of her brother.
I loved the story. Very nicely done, an unconventional incest story done exceptionally well. Hope you write more of this.
Being an ageing hetero I don't know why I opened this story.
Gotta say it really was a pleasant read.
Oddly enough, as a gay guy, I loved this story. I'm wondering where it goes from here. Does she turn her brother? Would love to read more!
This was really light hearted and sexy at the same time. Nice set up, fun characters, and great break up dynamics. I'd love to see where these two take their changing relationship.
Pretty solid, i'd like to see more of this as a series
The title almost turned me off, I thought there was going to be something mean-spirited about this story. But it was actually a lot of fun and kind of sweet. I gave it a five, can't judge a book by its cover I guess.
I'd love to see this continued to see more exploration. Maybe he could get a blowjob from his sister or she could talk him into fucking her pussy next time. He seems to like her tits to. Such a great story!
As someone else said, the title implies something a lot more mean spirited, but this is actually a really fun story. Your writing is fantastic in all your stories, which is why you're one of my favorite authors on here. Can't wait to see more from you!
I really like the concept of this story, a gay person pushing sexual boundaries instead of it happening the opposite way; very new, very edgy. Please consider continuing their story. It's so hot. :)
A totally different twist to the subject. I am enamored with this concept, more chapters please
I love a hot brother & sister story, and this one is scorching. Thanks for publishing it.
You need to write a sequel where the brother eats her ass and cums in her bowels :)