by PussySlut_28
That was a very sexy little snippet it leaned strongly towards “reluctance” which is one the of the story types that I love. It was unfortunately very rushed and most of it lacked realism. It would benefit hugely from a rewrite with more details. Despite that I really enjoyed it, so thanks !
Tess (UK)
I found this story exciting, but had trouble with how fast she gave in to the men. There was no chase in the rows of books or from floor to floor. I still loved it. and will read more of what she has written.
John.