by CUrsulaMcKracken
I really enjoyed this sexual souffle. Your pacing is excellent, bringing the reader deep into the story with only vague hints of the sexual combat to follow. And it was a form of combat, although reluctant; isn't all fighting reluctant?
Finally, the sex scenes were complex and tracking just whose doing what to whom is not an easy task. And they were HOT! Very hot. I do hope you decide to write more erotica, for if you don't we all lose.
Thanks.