by peach_
IM LONGING FOR THE RIGHT "MISS RIGHT".
THANKS FOR THE STIMULATION. KEEP WRITING.
OMFG this was such a hot read. I love stories about seduction and people letting go of their inhibitions. The story moved along at a nice pace and I enjoyed the build up. I agree with Anonymous (07/10/11) about the thesaurus but other than that I say a very good job on your first submission.
Elle_S
Omg i couldnt stop cumming! It was fucking awesome lol! It just went on and on and on... A-maz-ing.... And btw chapter 2 would be awesome! I would do anything to watch that!!!!
Lots of stories from a gal RECEIVING her first lesbian massage. Nice to read the reverse - gal GIVING her first. You describe your feelings (physical and emotional) very well. Thank you! I just know there's more to this story and I wanna be there.
This story had me hot from the first sentence! I hope there will be more..