by Fanofan
Ever notice that it is the anonymous ones that make the nasty comments? I enjoyed your story but it was way to short, bet mom would enjoy it in the ass also.
There is a backstory to this. It was good but to fast. We need to know more of his mother's history.
Every son should be allowed to fuck his mother, period!
The story is short, but to the point. I don't read them when they're 5 or more pages without skipping part of it.
My only negative is, you need an editor.