by cockywriter321
I thoroughly enjoyed this story--for its warmth and for the passion it provided. I'm fascinated by brother-sister romantics and have even written one here among many other stories but I found yours the best. She is a delight and he is wonderful in his confusion. I'll read your others now.
Next chapter???
I'd really love to see where this leads...I hope more is coming!!
I really enjoyed the story, reconnection after years. There was only 1 part that bothered me. I understand leaving a spouse you don't love but she seems so willing to just leave her daughter. I couldn't imagine just leaving my kid.
Maybe I misunderstood but it came across as the sister willing to basically abandon her kid, not just a divorce with shared custody. Made me think less of the sister and detracted from caring about what she wanted.
Enjoyed it, I hope there is another chapter or two to follow.....
How can a 5ft 4 and a 1/2 inch woman have long legs? You must be only 4ft tall your self
"I opened my eyes and saw my sister kneeling between my legs, her cock in my mouth..." ???
Good story. I would like to see a follow up. One thing that bothers me is how easily she can divorce her husband and leave her kid with him. At least her brother is feeling trepidations.
I like incest stories about older brother and sister...not horny teenagers. I too was a little disappointed in her wanting to leave her family.
I like your writing. This is the first of yours I've read. I had a difficult time with her willingness to leave her husband but I remember how difficult it was for me to leave my long time girlfriend to marry my wife. Everything is different for people. You now when its right, even if it's only 10 days together. A story should make you think. Consider your opinions. View things from a different perspective. This one does. Bravo.
Hey, Cockywriter321! Sorry, my finger touched the 4 as I went for the 5 but you deserve a 5.
But you’ve got to read this paragraph of your story very carefully and figure out who’s cock you’re talking about.
This was new. I had never actually come in any of my dreams before. I opened my eyes and saw my sister kneeling between my legs, her cock in my mouth, an abundance of white goo spilling from her lips.
Cheers!
(11/12/20222) I liked it. But the issue of leaving their spouses and children should have been dealt with a bit more seriously, IMO.
This really is a five star story...I gave you (4) because of the sister deciding to leave her child behind. That her marriage is over, I understand that; BUT, a mom leaving her child like that...aaawww, hell no! That is more wrong than fucking her brother like that!
Still, would like to see a sequel...🤨
I have to agree that his was a 5 star offering UNTIL the sister decided that she would abandon her daughter to be with her brother. This issue should have been dealt with, possibly she and her brother discussing her seeking partial custody in the divorce proceedings.
Better yet, keep the status quo until her daughter graduated college or got married. Until then, they could keep their 'Siblings With Benefits' relationship secret, rendezvousing cautiously whenever possible on an ongoing basis.
Five four and has "long" legs hardly seems likely unless they are attached to her waist.