by bigcanuck
Chrisie Poo and others of his ilk always use crude language as a substitute for real manhood. He and his cousin in Canada, who wrote this abysmal little "story," don't have the flexibility of mind and imagination to find better words to get the same idea across. In my experience, these kind of people are wimps in their hearts, though they constantly bluster and deride others' opinions. Poor Chrisie. Perhaps someday he will regain his manhood and get the education he so badly needs to appreciate better things than a constant stream of four-letter words that do not advance the purpose of erotic writing.</p>
<p>As for this "story," it is truly pornographic because it has absolutely no redeeming quality about it. It is a complete waste of your valuable time to read so don't bother.</p>
<p>Ron123XYZ in the Most Fantastic Country On Earth, The United States Of America</p>
..."vulgar" language distasteful. Stupid fairies should read Dr. Seuss. I like how randy this family is.
This could have been a decent story. But using the word "fuck" for every other word detracts from it greatly. Clean all that vulgar crap up and it could be ok.