All Comments on 'Fucking My Lesbian Twin and Her GF'

Let’s hope he continues to fuck both of them, and Carla, then Sis are soon pregnant!

Absolutely love this fantastic story! Only thing is I wish he did still cum inside his sister instead of the facial. 5 stars!

I cannot recall three pages worth of erotic maneuvers as scintillating as these. Well done, sir!

Sis and girl frd together. That is so hot.

Extremely hot and energetic sex. To hell with plot! Just get on with the sex! has much to recommend it.

Holy Fuck! This is so fucking intense and hot. MORE MORE MORE!

Need to make more chapters with twists and turns

hope you can add more to this story....

Please add to this wonderfully sexy story!!!

Continuation please. Maybe add a GF for Jason or maybe the twins share the GF in the relationship and also impregnations? There's a potential beard for the twins

Make it to where both girls are pregnant and the brother is the father

This was so poorly written that I’m at a loss for words. There is no story. There is nothing other than poorly written sex.

This was terrible.

1 star.

Lil bro needs to continue to fuck both unprotected and knock them both up at the same time.

The one critic here is an idiot. You write well and clearly relate some experience with lesbian women. I’ve been there with a cousin and her GF. It all rings true. Bravo!

You posted the same exact story with same characters and same ending under a slightly different name from a syory You posted in 2018. I'm wondering why you did this.

I couldn't finish half of one page, let alone three.

Not worth reading if you don’t know the theme of the story.

God damn that was a good story!

Too much screaming caps and repeated dialogue. I got bored of the repetition after a while.

I can't delete the original story. I can only request it be deleted and wait for the admins to take it down. It's a low priority for them.

"Truth of Dare" was a Typo I missed when I submitted for publication. Again, I can submit an edit but the admins make the change in their own time.

Any chance you're going to continue this story?

Great start to a threesome tail that could become quite interesting. Maybe they all could move in together and get Carla and Erin pregnant. So many possibilities. Well done, please continue. 5 stars

Predictable but oh so hot, lucky bastard.

I enjoyed the story. Will there be another chapter? AAAA++++

Really hot but I would love a sequel!

Yeah, that final sentence of the story was a defining moment. Lesbians are not going to get that worked up over a guy and his dick. There's a lot of this story that I hit the fast forward button on because it was too repetitive. It would have been a lot better from a different approach. For instance, suppose that Erin never dated any guys because Carla seduced her first and convinced her to go Lesbian. But while they're still a couple Carla begins to think that she might could do a guy because she has found herself attracted to Erin's brother. So they hatch a plan for Carla to seduce Jason as well. But during that seduction Erin discovers that she has feelings for her brother and the seduction becomes a threesome.

Just adding background changes this from a jerk off tale into an erotic story. 3/5

more please

very good