All Comments on 'Fucking My Wife and Her Sister'

Your grammar is atrocious

To anon 1. Clearly English is not this writer's first language. I too found it difficult to read. However I liked the storyline. Author, find you a good editor, quickly, and see how much your writing, and scores improve. Storyline and potential-5. Grammar and spelling-0. Remember, grammar is not what you call your parents' mothers.

Mistakes in English grammar notwithstanding, this is one of the most real and convincing stories I have seen on Literotica! It's like talking to a real guy about his life and problems over a couple of beers.

You say your wife is 18 how is this underage? Then out of nowhere u want to have group sex and still want to call the autorities.. if anything you would go to jail also or your brother in law can now blackmail you because you let on about how she ia under age and you still let him fuck her... i gave this 1 star

When English is your second language, you should do us the courtesy of making that known, up front.