by spattjack
Sadly the ludicrous dialogue makes it immediately and abundantly clear why this is the Terry chapter with the lowest rating. What happened to the colleagues gradually teasing each other? The series was never great but the dialogue here is just clownish. I'm guessing also the reason that planned meeting next week never happened...
Good premise.
Terrible story.
Dialog is so ridiculous that there's no way the stoty could have been erotic.
One star.