by carlf1918
can look to find something that was never lost. TK U MLJ LV NV
This kind of story is NOT erotic..it's purely disgusting.
I liked it. The story held together well. I was worried for our character for a while. It was nice for a change that the only loser was the husband we don't know, who was not a sympathetic character.
Really good writing. The only thing I didn't like was the ending. Seriously guys, I have a lot of close girlfriends and always have. But there has never been even one of my friends that I'd share my man with. There has also never been any of my friends that I'd bed down with. I know this is all fantasy stuff but you all need to let that one go. I'm not a prude I have no problem going down on my guy but there is no way possible that I'd stick my face in some other woman's fur burger. It just wouldn't ever happen. The ending ruined a great story for me.
Just sayin...
Nicely written and edited, and the characters were believable.
Interesting to read with a good storyline that is fast moving plus being erotic in the sex scenes.
Well done, thanks for the read.
Each to his or her own taste, but I thought the story was better before the linkup with Lake.
ways to cook, or spice up a relationship that is impervious to outside influence, TK U MLJ LV NV
only LW story. Too bad. Maybe I'll try some of his stories in other categories. This one needed at least one more proofreading.
You call this a marriage, just fuck her and marry here. Now her best friend ,only a writer can make up this shit.
Magic they got an hotel room without checking in,the key must have arrived in her handbag by thought transfusion.
Not sure you would call this a marriage but i guess its possible just like im not sure this is a actual loving wife story either as he has been married before so I guess it depends on why he got divorced from his first wife however it still has a damn cheating slut well honestly 3 cheaters 2 sluts though some wouldn't call the 2 cheaters since they were fucking the other together and both had permission however those of us who were raised in the old school ways about marriage still calls it cheating once you're in a exclusive relationship you only fuck your partner period means all the other people are out of the question means no threesome or anything that ship sailed when you became exclusive especially when you got married no and if about it