All Comments on 'Fucking the Team Ch. 01'

An outstanding start to what I hope is a long series, like a chapter for each player and then a conclusion. I also hope you have plenty of time available for writing. Keep up the good work.

good start, hope you add orgasm denial to the tags of the next chapters

Very hot! A typo or two, but nothing too distracting. This is a great setup for a series.

Hooked to this too, but still eager for the continuation of roomate series :(

Why didn't the coach just shower at home?

So good! Please write more soon!

Great beginning of the story.... please continue

Love the body you gave her...! and her pose that finally made him break...checks all my boxes

wondered about the 'female submissive' tag when started this-this touches on more than erotic coupling

five, and moving onto your other story-interesting premise

Should name the next girl Kheisha! xx

Slay?

Identifying a girl as being 22 and then repeatedly referring to her as a teen is more than a little jarring, but aside from that logistical lapse this was downright magnificent.