All Comments on 'Fucksucking'

ty for that title thats my new word for today

I liked it. The story would benefit from an editor. Some parts were unclear and there were some small grammatical issues. Keep writing.

Your writing is not improving. If anything, it's getting worse. An eighth grader could do a better job.

1 star

I would volunteer but I'm afraid I couldn't make enough sense of your writing to know where to start.

Beyond awful, both the story and especially the writing. Glad I missed part 1.

This would appear to be an unauthorized sequel to bjking's "Fucklicking", written by someone not overly familiar with English. The original story is quite good, don't let this put you off it. https://www.literotica.com/s/fucklicking