All Comments on 'Fudgie Ch. 01'

I don't know if this is a real story but it seemed real, I enjoyed reaing it. It made alot of sense to me, I like ral women not the manufactured barbie dolls on pro porn.

Oh, Charlotte....how I've missed your work! It reads so real and builds so inexorably, just terrific stuff. I'm heading right to Ch. 2, happy to know what a Fudgie is!

Nice

Nice, warm story. Very arousing!

I'm thinking of you pressed up against my back while I read this.

Love you,

Cindy

Very nicely written. Excellent character development. I love the way you captured Charlotte's suppressed curiosity and desire to know another woman. As Charlotte slipped her leg around Cindy and straddled her back, I could feel my own thighs begin to flex and squeeze together. Well done. Janet

I love how you are taking your time to develop the story and the character....or is that a personal story? lol. It is so good that I cant really tell. I cant want to read part II. Thank you for sharing.

Nice little story but wished it were longer.

So far so good!

Ocean Claire

I’d love to be there while you lean back against me, stroking your shoulders and hair. Looking forward to reading Chapter 2.

It’s probably your best work!

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Kay

A beautiful beginning - developed at just the right pace, with a lovely climactic (in every sense!) finish. I love it!

A nice story and the development of the tale is great but could be a bit longer.

Good anyway!