All Comments on 'Fulfillment in the Sun'

Just enough back story to set the scene and the sex was, well, hot!

This is a case of pure stupid sex, wanting to get a girl in school pregnant. Not a story that should be written.

You left things very open. I'm glad you didn't nervously cram a fake "they married and she had six kids with him." Now what about her parents? His family/friends? Is he just a volunteer or paid? And then there's the other parents... keep writing! Anton