by notnice66
Hey, that was some story. Anal stories are mostly made to sound boring, like fucking a pussy, which secretes only juices, the Author here describes the real "hidden" truth, that shit smearing on cocks is mostly the case, made it sound very real, Congratulations! But pissing in the ass? i gotta try that one!
You must have the sexiest ass on earth!!! And I would love to pack your shit!!!
you made the story sound so real you should try double entry into your bum at the same time.
I read this and loved it...very factual and made me horny as hell- then I read your nasty boat story...WOW! Even better!
This is a very hot story. Thinking of how to introduce this sort of play to my wife :-)
Such a sexy and refreshingly-daring tale, it pushed many a button. it's a natural topic/area but i'd never read about it in such a free-thinking way before...so realistic too - there's nothing as naughty or racy as 'forcing' a girlfriend to let you bum-fuck her especially when she 'really needs a crap'!
im a bifem,with a bi hubby,u can imagine where his fingers,tongue and cock seem to live.we read this story together,then had wonderful spate of really hard ass fucking,i cud hardly walk afterwards !!
I gave it the poorest rating, not because of the subject matter, but because I felt it was so poorly written. Toilet games are not my thing but if it's yours I can understand it. The writing sounded odd? Surely you can do better. this is the first story I've rated this low.
Your writing style is very matter of fact and raw. If I wanted something flowery I would go read a romance novel. If I want something down and dirty, I will come to you. *****
Dam this story is hot ! Made me so wet and horny I had to fuck my ass with a 7 inch dildo !
Write more nasty anal fucking with shit and piss. You are awesome!
love it so much, more please xxxx
Ohhh.. I'm SO hard reading this! It's got everything, spanking, pissing in someone's ass, anal.. mmmmmmmm.. Nice.
It sounds and feels so good, I want to fill her bowel to overflowing
This was such a perfect story! I would love to pack the shit up someone's ass with my cock and / or have someone pack my own shit up my ass! Filling it with piss would be a nice touch, too.
Very nicely done. Love the piss enema - those are so much fun to do!
I want you to know I read this between 12-13 years ago, and I'm 25 now. I believe I read it on my PSP. Hah! This story impacted me in ways you'll never understand lol. It literally sent me down a path of booty debauchery, and gave me kinks I'm still exploring to this day. I'm glad to have found it again, for old time's sake. So, thanks for that!
Now, onto the writing...Well. Back then, I thought this was art. You were literally my William Shitspeare. But now, I see the errors. Your work doesn't flow, and needed better punctuation. Everything sorta crams into eachother. Could've used more details. All things you probably know now, it being fif-fucking-teen years since you wrote this! Good God.
The subject matter, though? Piss enemas? It was enough to corrupt a perverted, underaged young teen who had no business on literotica. Nice to read this again and remember where it all began. Parents, keep your kids off the internet LOL.
Didn't realize that this story was about eating and drinking shit and piss. Sorry to say this but your fucking disgusting. It doesn't get more vial than this.
Reading the other comments, it is good to know that I am not the only pervert ...LOVE the toilet games !
I absolutely love Anal Sex with women but this was Gross, Stupid and Dangerous. Love a Submissive Girls but finding those things Sexy and Lustful gave me a Severe Case of Erectile Malfunction. I usually say to each their own kinks, this was just to much on the Sick O Dial !!!
Scat is completely uninteresting to me. However, I have great appreciation for messy since, in my mind, it’s proof that all involved were willing to do anything that gave them all pleasure.
In this story, the physical teasing and verbal goading between them was simply fun to read. They were clearly kindred souls lucky enough to find another with aligned kinks, or at least, the willingness to explore together without judgment.
Nice. Thank you!!