by ThatNewGuy
If, as you say, you’re goal is to improve as a writer, then unfortunately you haven’t left yourself much room. I’ve started to read all your work on here and so far it’s outstanding. 5 stars for each to date, but only as I can’t award more!
Very nice...good pace, well structured, & very romantic. Some ppl may find fault but I enjoyed every word. 10 out of 5 😊
This is a sweet story beautifully told. Your writing is seamless and fluid, characters real and believable, and the physical romance has a depth of feeling that is rich and that rings true of lovemaking that connects two souls. Thank you for that reminder of moments that for me are long past.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your writing.
Great story. Well written and very thoughtful. The "sex" scene was handling delicately yet sensually. Keep up the good work! Nice job building up the relationships between the characters.
Great romantic story. It made me cry, it made me smile, and it brought three people to life.
Such a cool story. You should expand another chapter with a newborn completing your family. Kate would love it.
A lovely romance. I know how difficult it is to accept a new love when you have lost an old one. I lost my love of 40 years to cancer when I was 75. I then expected to be alone for the rest of my life.
After 5 years to my astonishment someone new came into my life and we have discovered a wonderful new love together.
Thank you
This story is a two-tissue happy romantic story.
I will reread it later and potentially post a another comment.
With gratitude
I actually didn’t care as much for the characters in this one as in others. I don’t think that being temporarily upset with the first movement after losing a spouse tragically is actually difficult for those with even the barest empathy to understand. So, I can’t blame the absent bio dad for abandoning Katie. Must’ve had a premonition of her general shittiness.
Wow, wow, wow! You are a gifted writer! You introduced us to 3 people and let us learn about them, and shared wisdom through the evolution of their pain and love story. And the romance and love-making was well written, beautiful, and hot! Well done, and please write more!
You have an awesome ability to put true life feelings into words. I have read many of the sexy stories on this site, but you weaved true life experience into the story so well. The shared shared sexual experience between James and Sandra was beatifully intertwined and was truly exciting. Thanks for your skillful talent.
You are an excellent storyteller. Bravo.
The characters you created are rich and human, full of emotion. The story line flowed well and steady, not too fast or dragging.
I'm so glad I found this story and will be reading more.
Great one...sweet without being maudlin
Katie was a real tough nut...
You really bored into the details of farming...
Loved the characters, dialogue
Easy fave/five
A combine can go lower than 6 inches!!! It can skim the ground and harvest all.
A very romantic and emotional moving and very inspiring story, I loved reading it.