All Comments on 'Full Circle'

first of your works that i have read, great story 5 stars

A lovely story. The dialogue made me smile; the descriptions of the food made me salivate; the proposal made me cry — a trifecta! Well done. 5*

Loved it

I am going to make a strange admission for an erotic site. While I will read sex scenes in stories that are just for the erotica, I don't like reading sex scenes in a romance story. I think that sex between people who love each other is private.

That's just my quirk.

Absolutely 5 stars

Sappy in the best possible way ;--)

A truly lovely story. Well done, sir.

Beautiful, poignant and incredibly well-written. Thank you for sharing!

Outstanding! Truly what romance stories are meant to be. Love & hate. Sorrow and happiness. 5***** all the way! Cheers. Frankie

What not to like about this fab story.

Thank you.

OUTSTANDING story! A good, solid 5*, although some of the farming references bothered me. It was nothing serious, but unless he had thousands of acres or operated a combining business, it wouldn't take as long to combine his wheat as you indicated. If he had those thousands of acres, did he lease them? Unless he was fabulously wealthy or received help from someone, how did he buy them? Good cropland is EXPENSIVE, even in God-forsaken Kansas.

Wow. That was really good.

I really enjoyed it.

You knew how to describe the difficult path to creating a new chance, to creating this new family.

But above all, we could feel the fear, the doubt, the pain, the love, ...... of all the characters.

It was really full of emotion and felt very natural to me. I congratulate you.

Outstanding story, I loved it! I don’t think I’ve ever read a romance that started with crop circles before, but that’s very original - as is having Sandra and her family coming from Ecuador and featuring food from her home nation, small things maybe, but it makes this story stand out from others with a farming backdrop. This is an easy 5⭐️, please keep writing, many thanks for both writing and posting, cheers, Ppfzz.

Great story...

5 stars great because it was, IMHO, very enjoyable !

I hope that you seriously considered having him formally adopt Katie, which was actually what I thought was in the envelopes. While some might think that would have been too formulaic or even trite, to me that would have been the full completion of this tale of lost souls finding each other.

Maybe you considered it, maybe not... as it's your story, you got to choose. To me, it would have been the only thing I would change, to add the icing on the cake, but it was great the way it was.

Nicely done, sir !

Damn, that was good. I’ve been reading some really awful stuff in this category lately, but this was excellent from beginning to end. I only read (and write) in the Romance genre, so when I saw you were a veteran of places I pass on, I was doubtful. Glad I was proven so wrong. Please, please write more. Thanks for sharing. 5*

Very well written story. It's al the little things that fill it in like the food and his wife's sketches.

Thanks for writing

I could read a story like this everyday and have a permanent smile on my face and a song in my heart.

The Hoary Cleric

Beautiful story, simple but poignant. Five stars.

Sorry…nothing constructive to offer. You’ve brightened my life several times with your talent. If I could help improve your writing, I would certainly do so. Okay, how about this? I think you deserve a wider audience.

I started to read it, within the first half page I knew where it was going. The writing was good and the premise plausible, but it's been done hundreds of times before. I simply wasn't interested in 6 pages. I gave it a good score for the effort and time spent writing something beyond cucks, swapping, unrealistic IR and bondage.

Loved it.

Very good story.

A story that grows on you.

Hopelessly romantic. Loved it.

5 big gold stars. You will soon have to change your name. Keep on wrting and I’ll look Foyt for you every time I’ll log on to the site

Really moving. Liked the characters. A good start had me engaged half way down the first page.

Wonderful story! Good easy read! Very entertaining!!

Very well done. Thank you!

So slowly th wounds heal for each person involved. Bravo!

Wow! That was a great story ! Great character development and story line.

Thank you for your efforts!

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Must be allergy season, not a dry eye in the house. And the analogy with the milo seeds wrapped things up with a nice bow. Thank you for sharing!

Your writing is a gift to all of us. Well done!

Beautiful story, shows that there is always some people that belong together even in the toughness of times.

Your beautiful loving story brings tears to my eyes -- and it just grows to show hoe much James and Sandra come to love each other deeply -- and earn at the same time from their steps and lives together. I imagine James removing his clothing to reveal a goof d] some of sexy chest hair to please Sandra, and the hard cock she could feel through his pants when they first embraced. Please write more -- you are talented and know how to touch the spirit!

Thank you. That was absolutely wonderful.

5*****, easily. I’ll now have to explore your other stories.

A compelling story of renaissance and romance. I won’t soon forget James, Katie, and Sandra - oh, and Luna too. Thanks very much.

Makes one wish...just a lovely story of burgeoning romance (although I admit I skimmed the sex scene). Full five stars.

Great story…love rocks when it is sincere and true. You captured what I believe true love looks like in this story. Thank you.

What they said! Well written, well characterized, with some nice touches (crop circles, Ecuador) thrown in to differentiate it from the run-of-the-mill Romance. Sure, I knew where it was going from the first couple of pages, but you made the journey very pleasant! Now I've got to check out more of your works - well done.

Well written stories is the reason I stay on Lit.

Thank you.

A most delightful story!

5

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Enjoyed, the story, but a grain crop called milo had me really puzzled. Did some research when I finished (I'm an Aussie, so google threw a lot of Milo the milk drink flavouring sites at me) to find it's just sorghum, but likely to modified to suit the Kentucky area. Thanks for the something new I learnt today.

Best story I’ve read on Lit in a long while. There has been a severe drought of well written stories.

Brilliant story.

Now that was one heck of a romance!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Just an excellent story all around.

You did a great job of painting everyone's emotions accurately and their inner battles. Excellent story from beginning to end.

Really nice. I especially enjoyed the opening lines. Pulled me right in, and I was hooked. 5* from me!

Fucking hell. I never cry reading stories here. Until now. Amazing work, 6 stars. Thank you for sharing this.

Very nice work developing the characters

I'm an avid reader and if the story does not flow along, I lose interest. I even forgot I had selected this story for the erotic designation. Forget that - it stood alone as a romance.

Fantastic

I absolutely loved it, it is just so good on so many levels! Great start and then so well developed. An instant favorite for me and I will be reading it again, many times. Thanks.

What a fabulous read brilliant

Wonderful, 10 stars! It's too bad Sandra wouldn't lose her IUD. Katie needs a sibling, then James and Sandra would have 2 kids... WONDERFUL!!

What a spectacularly written romance sir! One could involve themselves deeply into your characters especially the MC & Katie. Heart felt! Very much appreciate your effort & time. Thank you! 5*

this is one of the best stories I've ever read on the website. absolutely wonderful.

Enjoyable read

Wonderful.

TNG,

You engage my heart every time I read your stories..they are written with such emotion and meaning. Please never stop writing and publishing here. 5* all the way

One of the best romance stories I have read. Your writing really is very good. Thank your kind editors for pulling such a great story from your mind and also your helpers getting the right words and info about farming. Looking forward to more of your great writing. 5 STARS PLUS

Very well done - rather more realistic than many. Nicely balanced. Well done. More please - and soon!

Where's the star multiplier button? 5×5? 10x5? Something so much more than the pig snot normally found on this site. What a delightful exploration of 3 flawed,damaged people navigating a sea of internal despair. Beautifully touching and humorous at just the right time. It's time to delve into this authors other work.

Great romantic story! Well thought out plot with a heartwarming surprise ending. I look forward to reading your future stories. FIVE STARS*!*!*!*!*!

Great story! I look forward to reading more from you! Thank you!

I laughed, and at the end I cried. Magnificent story.

Amazingly romance, sucked me right in. Just lovely.

Great Story !!!

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Loved It !!!!!

Really nice story with believable characters.

Technically very good - no bumps or holes in the grammar, well paced, thoughtful subject matter, well presented.

The plot was sincere and pleasant, warmed my heart! I'm encouraged to spend my time reading more of your works.

Thank you for your effort and putting yourself 'out there'.

Okay, now you've done it, you made this old man cry. You should be very proud of yourself. I loved this story, it made me feel things I have not felt in years. 5 stars across the board. Thank You and please keep writing.

Ok,,, who is cutting up onions in the area, amazing 5⭐️ story, well done

I don't give out "5s" but this is an exception, thank you.

Dammit! Choked me up.

Seriously.... your first romance story. OMG I sure as hell hope it's not the last! That was amazing!! Thank You!!

I admire the character development, the pace and the way you wove the story into one of emotion, soul-searching and realization of what makes life a success. Well done. Keep writing and sharing what makes you tick.

Beautiful

Nicely Done! Wonderful story ❤️

Please take this as a compliment, but you truly remind me of SW MO Hermit. Your story grows organically from the rich soil you planted it in. Thank you.

The story is beautiful. It had me in tears throughout. You don't have much to improve on. keep up the good work.

jack

Beautifully written.

A story with a strong plot,

worked out perfectly.

Not really a LW story but who cares.

A story like that, needs to be seen by all.

I'm honoured to have been included.

Top ratings from me.

Excellent story. Not as much erotica as most stories here but that actually isn’t a detraction. It was very well written with a fantastic plot and great character development. I really enjoyed reading this story, learning about these characters and feeling the emotions that your words drew out.

10 stars!

AB FAB 👍🇬🇧 5 ⭐️.

Very well written and enjoyable! You could complain it is formulaic but my thought is what story is not! Shakespeare is formulaic now might not have been in his time but definitely is now! Most important I was entertained and got teary at end. The story did a good job of expressing emotion and feeling to me!

A good reading time.

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

This is one of the best stories on the site.

You nailed it!

Wow! Such a beautifully crafted story. I really enjoyed this. Well done!

I gave this 5 stars but honestly I didn't like either the mother or the daughter too much. They treated MC like crap, and didn't apologize at all, or felt they did anything wrong.

Life in words is perfect, things go right, love is always returned, battles are won. In real life none of that shit happens. Things fall apart, people do stupid shit. Life is nuts. Sometimes you open the thing and it’s great, sometimes… not. This lovely little story really reminds me of that. You can rebuild from the ashes and… hope exists. Not every author gets this, and that makes this story very sad and happy and SPECIAL. Very well done. I would give it 100 stars if I could. It made me happy.

I liked it. Very well written, very insightful, and full of love. Full of human mistakes and triumphs.

Brilliant. Completely deserving of 5 stars, with several very touching moments. It’s obvious a great deal of care went into this, and not just in the details about farming. Thank you for sharing!

I'm not crying, damn it.

A wonderful love story that just keeps getting better with every read. You totally nailed the emotional content and draw. I can never read this without having to stop every time to wipe off the iPad screen and change tops due to tear and snot overload.

That was wonderful. I just read it for the second time, and I loved it. This is the best story I have read on this site. Thank you. I will share this with my wife.

5*****

I enjoyed this story so much. It feels so genuine, and engaging; it encourages the reader to "turn the page", and to begin with immediacy to cheer for each character's growth and ultimate contentment. You are very talented in developing an almost instant reader chemistry to your characters, and the desire to read to the last word. I loved this story--so well done! 5*

This is a special story that feels real. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Excellent

As a Kansan, I really enjoyed the story. You have the gift, know and understand how genuine love weaves itself into our lives & those around us, The first grain I learned about was the milo growing behind our Salina home. As a Cincinnati transplant- thanks for your insight..

Excellent 5*