All Comments on 'Full Circle Halloween'

A little confusing, I don't recall him mentioning much about his wife although he did say some things about his Girlfriend.

The way it ended, okay I guess that works but it seemed like a Kluge.

Not bad writing, but a little confused as I said.

REALLY? I found myself laughing so hard after learning the names of the first 6 babies are the characters from the sitcom "F.R.I.E.N.D.S" and it found it more crazy good with the thought of the other kids named after characters from Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter. I ended up saying, "Go with sitcoms for the baby names. Much better." lol. Overall... It's a beautiful read.

Turns around and is okay with making his friend a cuckold? Then turns into a cross dresser? Did you miss any other cliche's? Did you proof read this mess? Or bother to think it through? This was a complete train wreck.