All Comments on 'Full Moon Madness'

by TamLin01

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Full of Suspense

Still wonder which is the worse beast.

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 5 years ago
Well, if Ray has no memory of his actions...

Definitely have to think less of her...

One, because she *does* know her husband is killing people...

And two, because what he's doing is without conscious intent while her cheating is premeditated...

Too bad Ray can't figure out his wife is a cheat...

SexlessStiffSexlessStiffabout 5 years ago
not a bad wolf story

needs a proofreader, but the story was ok.

roftlheoryroftlheoryabout 5 years ago
Ghost story time

You have a great way of revealing the story in a classic ghost story style. I'm a big fan of horror anthologies and you do it very well. Most of the good stories on literotica are an extremely long series, it's good to read some shorter ones. Having said that I wouldn't mind more of this one if there was a chapter two :)

There were some typos, most notably ". I'm here alone with a crazy person, she realized as he looked into the whites". And that same paragraph ends abruptly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I knew Ray was the werewolf from the start... but not that she *knew*! Love the CCR part, too!

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