All Comments on 'Full Moon Strays Ch. 05'

come on alpaca keep pounding them out

ill love the seires and hope you can make more

at first it just seemed like a lot of meaningless sex, but you've created an intricate storyline out of it all. it's in depth, explores some interesting concepts and well... it's damn fun to read. keep up the good work

This is the best episode in the series

I am almost afraid to say it....... but the sex almost seemed meaningless to the storyline you created in this chapter..... This chapter was perfectly balanced.

Great read

I like this.

I'm really enjoying this story. Rich characters, deep emotions, questions raised about how a person should face the world.

Well done!

Please tell me you are a professional writer, I want more of your work in full novels!!

It's really, really good.

Not very often you see a Shagooth actually take some damage. Very well, written. At first I was a little annoyed with the world you'd created here, but I do enjoy your writing.

this my new fav stor yif it was a book i would read it everyday

...plot and storyline does matter. You are good. Yada, yada, yada (stroking ego here, not as good as stroking dick, but hell gotta keep the master happy) You're good..you're awesome...FUCKING GREAT DESCRIPTION OF SEX! Keep it up...I love your shit...no ego stroking there...just plain fact.

I can't wait to get to the end and that's why I haven't commented yet.... sorry (blushing). You are most definately talented and I applaud and bow humbly to your ability. Keep up the awesome work!! :-)

layer :: lair

prone = face down

supine = face up

sUPine :: face UP

Good tale, as always; one can always depend on an evil alpaca...

Thanks,

GeoD

Another five star installment

Just throwing these small flaws out

Even with her eyes clothed, => should be closed

Arthur was suddenly afraid. He floated off the ground, looking for an escape route.=> not Arthur, Patrick

when he let his seed loosed in her warmth. => not loosed, loose

Nathan just had to grin and bare it => bear it would be more appropriate here ? though he is bare too :)

Gave it 5 stars but did find the sex distracting from the story (never thought I'd say that). I found myself skimming over some fairly large parts of the text because the sex was not adding to the story but was interfering with it.