by vqfarrold
Excellent story. I like that it didn't go over the top at the end, like I assumed it would. It was short, intimate and believable! Keep it up!
Omg...this story really got to me... sooo erotic!!! Mmmm, so hard here
This actually happened to me once, and you've described it perfectly! You've a real gift for erotic writing. Looking forward to much more.
Oh wow... desperation stories are my favourite, and this one is one of the best I've ever read. Thank you.
you do have a gift for a realistic description - the contrast of elegance and embarrassment is well chosen. Nice story.
great story! no way Bart washes that stuff. he's probably still sniffing her piss soaked panties and jerking off like a mad man.