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Hate this kind of ‘stream of consciousness’ writing. Punctuation has a purpose.
Fucking edit your work at least give ita once over proof read
A great writer you're not, but thanks for trying. xo Bev
ignore the trolls.
there's some good stuff here.
i'm interested to see where you go with it.
Yes, ignore anyone who dares to have a different opinion from this simpleton.
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BTW, re: Part 2 to continue (if anyone is interested)
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If you can't decide whether or not to continue your own story, don't bother.