All Comments on 'Fun & Games While the Cat's Away'

I wasn’t sure about the no names thing at first, but that quickly became a non-issue as I got lost in the chase....

To me, the sure sign of a good story is when I can’t resist the urge to touch myself - and my panties were already soaked by that point! Most intense orgasm I’ve had in ages. Definitely going on my favourites list 👍

Started out almost interesting and got worse from there. Could have been 2 maybe 3 pages but 6????? WAY to long. The childish dialogue was very very boring after the first half page. The ending sex scenes were marginally exciting. I've not read anything of yours before to my knowledge but I doubt I will.

1 star

DragonRider55

It was a fun story, for sure, but throughout you had the grammar or syntax wrong, even on the last sentence. Please get someone to help edit your work; it's worth doing right.

I really love this story. The build up/ Chase is prefect. Do you have more stories on the way?

This series needs to go on at "The continuing adventures of The Princess and The Monster". There's a lot that can be explored there.

He never inquired nor was it stated when she was fertile. Was too long and drawn out.

Great story. Definitely a most interesting and naughty twist on the beauty and the beast. Loved that it wasn't your typical story. :<)

I skimmed and skipped half of the story. It was just dragging and repetitive. I think I understand what you were trying to do with the theme of the princess and the monster role-play but it just wasn't engaging and I couldn't connect with the chatacters at all. Especially the daughter.

Well written and exciting.

Wow, very believable,

The daughter had every intention of being deflowered,

The daddy was ready to take her cherry,

Now the wicked. Queen, needs to be brought into the story, the daddy or daughter needs to convince the mommy to get involved,