All Comments on 'Fun in the Afternoon'

age and physical descriptions would have helped make this story more erotic than it was. Truthfully, it was bland, no real mention of excitement or the raucous, edgy nature of hot man to man sex, especially for a first time experience of a middle-aged man. Give us some visual ideas of appearnce, the titillation of giving a blow-job and getting one, the feeling of stepping

outside of societal norms, maybe guilt, the thrill of the moment, the personalities involved.

Good effort if you're a first-time author, but development is key to turning on all us jaded smut-junkies. You have some stiff competition (ha ha) by some of the great writers on this site. Thanks for the effort!

Great story. Very well written. I can’t wait for the next installment!!!

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Good start. You have my attention and I hopeful part 2 is on the way.

Love the idea of a mature, gay 3-way with regular, horny old men just like me! Wish I could do this every day, I love gay sex!