All Comments on 'Fun in the Sun'

loved your story, i'm stroking right now. i love stories of seduction.

I would love to have the hubby come to the beach house and find the 2 of you in bed sleeping.

Let his own imagination wonder about your activities.

Then he will see the slight sunburn on your breasts and ass.

Tell him you nothing !

Nice story, Honey! First encounters are always so much fun and the fact that Sam doesn't even hesitate is wonderful. Hot sun, hot women, hot sex and cold drinks...is there anything better?

~lucky

ah a marguerita...my favorite drink. perhaps a bit of lime ruibbed around the edge of your pussy, a little salt sprinkled on it, a jigger or two of gin or vodka poured in or as much as you can hold, ifyou would serve this to me, it would be heaven. perhaps with a bit of persistence, the liquor could be enhabced with your cum...then this "licker"would be truly delighted!

Damn girl, that was hot!!!!!! Makes me want to venture out in the sun!!!!

~A~

slurp.. pardon, me. *swallowing thickly* thank you for the story.. ah.. i believe i must make a run to the packy before it closes.

Well done, Honey. Nicely written, beginning to end. Good premise, good characters. I could feel the apprhention and the anticipation.

Now. I need a cold shower.

You made an icey cold drink hot in this story, I didn't know you had all this, can I buy you a drink?

Honey, that was one hot story --and you know how I can tell? I've never even thought much about girl-on-girl sex, but this has me completely aroused! Wow. And I mean that! WOW!

Very hot, and nicely written. I like that the inhibitions were immediately thrown out the window. A woman losing inhibitions and giving into passion is as sexy as it gets.

That was sooo hot! Thank you!

absolutely luved it thanks xxx

this story has me so freakin hot right now that i'm ready to jump on someone abit a male or female

Oh yes, one of the most erotic stories I've ever had the pleasure to peruse

thank you darling - for sharing such wonderful stories with us... you are a talented writer... skilled at evoking arousal with your words...

I really, really, really enjoyed reading a couple of your stories..

mmmmm

did i ever

REALLY

enjoyed...

time to have a shower... I'm afraid I've made a mess of myself..

;)

xoxoxo

T.

...made me drop this from a 5 to a 4. I thought for a moment that a man had written this as it went so quickly to the penetration, even if it was with fingers. I felt there could have been more time spent lingering on the labia and clitoris: i.e. more tease before the penetration. Yes she was hot, but would she want it that quickly? Apart from that, a great story and highly erotic; so much so I can visualise that hour before husband brings his cock!Love Sofi

I loved this story <3 ;3 But... as a grammar nazi, I cringed every time you spelled MargaritAs wrong! Haha. It's an A, honey. Not an E. Keep up the writing :3

haha, I enjoyed this read. I liked the ending especially since my name is Joe. Nice write, keep up the wonderful work. I'd love to see more from you :)

Really enjoyable. Well written, easy to follow and very erotic. More please :o)