All Comments on 'Fun with Bri'

I really enjoyed the split viewpoints. Getting inside both their minds was very erotic. So, what's next for Bri and Kate?

Such a wonderful, slow building, erotic story. I am a new fan of seattlebreeze and find her story creations to be more than just worth the read. This, her latest of her quickly building library, is another one from her imaginative and fertile mind. Bri finds herself slowly being captivated by her boss and when asked to accompany her on a business trip their relationship blossoms from employee and employer to friend and lover. A remarkable transition for these two young business professionals that is beautifully described and written by this most talented author. Can't wait for more!!

I really enjoyed this one, the good character building, the slow build-up, and then a very nice finish. Thank you for sharing this with us!

As usual, seattlebreeze has put together another wonderful erotic adventure that makes you feel like you are living it.

Please post anther chapter about Kate and Bri!!!

Mmm. That was so fuckin hot.

Wow....I wish my mentor had shown me the ropes like that....thoroughly enjoyed the ride...

Being a runner I really related to Bri and her motivations. I really liked to slow and the sensual way she was seduced. Thank you for writing this, I'm looking forward to part two!

Glad I waited until bedtime to read this. I'll have some very lovely dreams tonight and for a few more nights. Chapter two may be delayed. Nice job!

I normally don’t like to read the longer stories, but this was sexy from the beginning and written beautifully! Can’t wait to read more!

have just discovered your story. Beautifully told. I wasn't sure of the two people telling the story. But it worked perfectly and with a delicious theme building all the way to the end. And yet the ending wasn't predictable. It flowed into delicious sex .

actually from the start this turned me off-two conniving cougars, lawyers to boot! cheating on their hubbies, plotting to seduce a subordinate, knowing what they were planning could , at a minimum, get them both canned, tho it would have been Kate, Crystal saying she didn't know anything about it

What an amazing, sensual, intimate, erotic tale you told here. I can't wait to steer other lit readers in your direction.

Mmm, so good. Can’t wait Tod read the next part.