All Comments on 'Fun with Wife's Friend Continues'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
spelling

Good writing. Just need to do a better job at proof reading.

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 7 years ago
Long Wait

Wow 15 years between stories. But I did enjoy both.

CHL88CHL88over 7 years ago
Great follow-up...

After 15 years, great follow-up! I agree that you could use an editor--typos can be a boner-killer, although they weren't with this nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Spell-check anyone..

Nice story but your horrible grammar ruined it. Try spell-checking before hitting the SUBMIT button next time.

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