All Comments on 'Funeral Sentiments'

by DanDraper

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
So realistic feelings under those circumstances

Some still together spouses fill little grief while those separated/divorced still have happy memories. The overwhelming feeling transformed to lust and a family member was closest and safest .

Very well written in content and mechanics.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Realistically, it would never end there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting setting to use, but it worked out very well for this story.

Excellent story, 5-stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

for me, this is how a story should end. it was about needing an emotional release, a good fuck. no marriage, no incestal babies, no long term love affair so they would have to deal with family...... it was just a good fuck.... much like an ex-girlfriend..... end in good friends and remembering it all

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesover 1 year ago

In the beginning, I found myself getting annoyed at Joey for not wanting to drive his widowed aunt to the funeral. What a schmuck. Still, his reluctance to fully surrender to his aunt's desires made the story much sweeter and helped with the anticipation. Hate to be that guy, but you need to do some editing; I saw several times where you misspelled Paula's first name. Good story.

DanDraperDanDraperover 1 year agoAuthor

@sucker4boobies Thanks for letting me know about that mistake. I edited this story several times, and I missed that mistake three times, it's kind of embarrassing that I missed that. As far as I know there are no other mistakes, but I promise to be more careful about that in the future.

At least you enjoyed the story, that's all that matters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm too spent from reading this and cumming hard, but this was exceptionally well done. 10/10

juanviejojuanviejo9 months ago

Cinco Estrellas!

bogg99bogg999 months ago

Loved the story and your storytelling. Very erotic and totally believable. Well done. TY

juanviejojuanviejo21 days ago

READ IT AGAIN...STILL CINCO ESTRELLAS!

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