All Comments on 'Fur Traders'

...lovely, tender, credible story. Thank you.

This is a tale of two young women who meet while shopping and end up making love in a canoe and what happens next.How this came about is a tender beleivable romance.

Please write more. You stories are observant, very well written and riveting.

That was so moving and i hope i see more of your writing

please continue with more chapters.

Atlanta,Ga

Dysphemist, I am so glad you have made a new submission... "Not a Home" is my favourite story on Lit !! It makes me cry everytime I read it. My only complaint about this new story is that it is a little too short. Would have liked more description of the first date I think.

More submissions please, I love your writing!

Angel_and_demon

That is both erotic and literate, excellent work!

very well written and lovely

This is Licking Good ! 17janice@gmail.com

I'm not a big fan of lessbian stories, but this one was very well done.Smooth,even plot and character development. Nice job, dysphemist.

60 year old George

A wonderful and gentle romance. Makes me long for summer days. Nice to see a new submission from you. :)

Such a sweet story. I loved the gentle way you handled the characters. Good luck in the contest.

The only time I ever had lesbian sex when out canoeing I got straw from fucking in a pile a hay bales in places where straw should not go! Loved this story, well done.

Sof x

This is a beautifully written story. Romantic, and seductive. I loved it. More please.=)

Very realistic and very nice.

I would love to hear more about the development of this wonderful relationship.

Jenni Elf

When I was a little girl we had a piece of property in the woods with a stream and a canoe. You captured it all perfectly, even the little glowing on the paddle at night. I had forgotten that, but it really is beautiful.

Just like your story.

Okay, that's it. You're a favorite authoress now. Deal with it.

kisses, `phfina

It's a pleasure to read your work; you are a good writer. Thanks.

as I mentioned before; not really a lot of description of the characters - but surprisingly your stories work very well without it, cudos

I really like your work and WISH that you would continue to give us more

Thank you;

DKP - 1 50 yo straight guy

This is a perfect short story - just enough background to flesh out the characters, a wonderful setting and a beautiful start to a relationship - this is how I get my "high", by reading stories like this - really puts a smile on my face...

Response to another review:

Character descriptions are for the unimaginative - except where it actually makes a difference to the story, they're unnecessary, and a good story (like this one!) stands on its own without them.

I read your other story, Not a Home twice a couple of years apart.

Good as well.

It is so nice to read a story that has the basics. After that it isjust story line and keping it moving. I admire anyone that can kput the parts together.

So Well Done dysphemist !!!

Take care,

KjY

SFi

Oh, almost forgot that missing part.

I think you left out the nite time flying critters, by design. Good idea.

And the moral of this story is never trust a small child with a secret. Poor Cassie, the family butt for things going wrong. But at least she got her well-deserved happy ending. I don't know how I missed this story the first time I read 'Not a Home' but I'm pleased I found it this time round. Perhaps not as sweet as 'Not a Home' but nevertheless, very enjoyable. You write well, dysphemist, so why haven't we had more from you?

Great short story... reminds me of the time I went to the Boundary Waters, a good place for two lovers... Thanks for the memories.

enjoyed both of them. There was a gentleness to them too often missing on this site. I do have one suggestion. Both stories start with the weather. Don't start with the weather. No one cares about the weather and it adds nothing to the story.

Sweet , tender and one corny joke ( ok yes I laughed at it ) .

Camping, candle light sex, so romantic .

I hate it when people are made to feel useless and incompetent so its with great joy to read a story when that person gets her girl she needs and deserves .

Beautiful.

............... believe it or not, when I worked on trawlers in my late teens early twenties.

The water looks spectacular at night, but too many look up at the stars instead of looking downwards.

A sweet and lovely tale.

A lovely story, well written.

what pleasant characters...!

and-dark curls-LOVE women that keep in natural...sick and tired of shaved/waxed bald vulvas

and they're both going to get really toned, thanks to Cassie's garage...!

Soothing and beautiful, enjoyable to reread.

Novella type stories - BORING!

Put them in Novella section.

Still a great story I love to read.

Pity you stopped writing. Nice storey.

A nice story, wish it was longer!

Thank you!