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Carmen slid it into her bag and continued on her way, glad that she had something other than a supernatural notebook to occupy her attention.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoI’m not exactly sure if this is the same for everyone, but I don’t see the point in having a third page whatsoever of it only contains a single sentence. Just 25 words.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe development of the characters and pace of the story telling is a joy, just enough to keep the reader interested wanting more, well done.
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhile a Futa version of Death Note is an interesting concept I really do not like the elements of absolute mind control, it removes any eroticism from the scene as it also going to simplifies the entire sex scenes into "Put penis A into Vagina B". Personally I think it would be more interesting for the main character to try seduce the transformed girls, perhaps giving herself an ultimate futa dick, but oh well.
McDouggalover 6 years agoI was not expecting this concept of yours to come back. Well written and interesting.
