by quintessentialquill
I liked her thought process. You captured her well. Please keep going.
this is such a sexy story, will we be lucky enough to read some more about these two?
Thanks for the comments! I am working on a second installment. It's a great pleasure to be able to share my writing with people - a dream come true for me.
Best - Q.Q.
Great story and for your first it is extremely well constructed and written. The plot, character development, story development and climax are all really good. It is beautifuly paced and keeps the reader engaged right through to the end.
I will look forward to reading more of your work.
Well done!
We Fucking Loved it, and we've only read the first chapter!