All Comments on 'Gabriella's Daddy'

Excellent build up, you tease the reader and then give them what they want with a mind blowing climax!

Great build up for a great story

More please

This story is super hot. I didn't understand the business about the panties, but the rest was really good and sexy. I enjoyed it as much as Gabby did.

Nookiehunter

WOMEN, or in this case 'a woman," expressed through his only "safe" approach: their most intimate garment. I have never read a better exposition of "pantie fetish" in my too many years. As a father and man equally injured by betrayal, I was not troubled by the incest but stunned by the daughters intuition and ability to draw her father back into love, the love of life and a sincere honest relationship. Bravo!

jjws %)

The long lead up was a waste- it was too sweet and light. Zero sexual tension. Last page of sex was OK

What every man dreams of happening .......... fantastic

Genuinely brilliant writing all the way through. Your style is excellent and you wrote with genuine sensuality. One extremely long, but utterly gratifying tease.

Well done!

As I have often said, not everybody likes tales of incest, but having said that, I find stories of true love (as opposed to lust) between close family members often to be heart warming and 'almost' acceptable! I enjoyed this really delightful story. Pete.

I normally don't get off on incest stories but the panty fetish drew me into the story and made me so horny that I had to find a quiet place to jackoff. Excellent story as I am into panties.

Fantastic build-up to the end! Great work!

I've read your stories elsewhere and was happy to find you on this site. This story was so well written, I think it may be your best effort so far. Keep writing those incest tales. They are just the best.

WC

I really enjoyed the story all together. I was glad that Gabby didn't go from virgin to a "fuck my ass, daddy" cum slut overnight. That made it more realistic. This story didn't follow the same tired formula I've noticed and I think that made it easily enjoyable. Thanks!

That was an awesome story. I was hard the whole time i was reading it. You did an awesome job telling your story. That is something I would like to do with my daughter if I ever had a beauty like yourself. Thanks for the story.

made me wish to be that daughter...

Super ! SUPER STORY !!!

gabriella an her daddy was one i really enjoyed, one of the best you are famous for. homer.

Very erotic writting. Thank you!

Scouries, you are in a caliber of your own on this site. If I could find another of your caliber, I would be reading his/her whole catalogue as avidly as I read yours. In any case, I can't just wantonly hand out 5's to you as I am judging each story against your others, but thanks for your hot and relatively grammatically correct writing, also for not using annoying euphemisms for the penis. Have a great day! Keep writing!

Beautifully written. Highly erotic but, more than that, romantic, in that it portrays the emotions of the daughter and father. Full marks.

made sense erotically, which appealed to my erotic sense. A close father/daughter relationship flowing easily, almost fatefully into something...more! A pleasure to read!

to simply flow along with the story. It was a gentle and wonderful joy to read, congratulations on such a wonder accomplishment. Please, please do not deprive the readers of your talent...we would be sorely lacking otherwise.

yes scouries, you have done it again, another sensual sexy story, you seem to have a flair of building up to the crescendo. great tale, thank you

Jim - I can only ever give you a 5 in the scoring but am quite happy to give you 100 every time I read one of your stories - they really are a turn-on - I love them - what about some grandma/grandson stories too - Jena121

This is not only a sex thing but a true love story. Dad and daughter, not with standing. This a great thing!! Alice

At last, someone who takes the trouble to create a story around the "act" we all want to read about, keeps the language appropriate for the scenario and makes the whole thing believable. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Ty :-)

It reminded me how much I wanted my grand daughter.

The story reminds me of when we allow things to mature on their own, they can be some of the most beautiful pieces of art we ever laid our eyes on! Your piece is no different!

Reading it, you couldn't help but feel the genuine love Gabriella has always had for her daddy, and his love for her is the same: mental and physical! I predict the two of them will have a very happy and long, wonderful life together as husband and wife, both being blessed by many children they will have together! Another excellent story, Scouries!

Thank you so much for taking the time to craft such an amazing submission. Wonderful character development and dialogue! I enjoyed it very much and would rate it a 200 if I could!

That's it I can't take any more of this torture . You swept me into your story and had me fucking that young lady on the beach .

omg i loved that story i think it may be one of my favorites.

i am amazed on how wet i got... keep it up

I really enjoyed your story of Gabriella and her father. It was almost believable and so exciting. I think I might try some of your other stories.

Sooo Good. So Sexy.

Hope there will be more of this.

Thank you for an entertaining story,no doubt the best I've

read on Literotica.

Please continue your story telling, I'll be looking for

your next tale.

Gabriella's Daddy Bravo! One of the best! Love all your submissions. Look forward to the next story.

Keep up the HOT writing

this was amazing.

I couldnt keep my hand away from my pussy

I had so many orgasms

it reminded me of my own sexual desires for my father. Whom I have fucked on several occasions. Amazing piece of work

Another great tale, Jim! I don't know how I managed to overlook this one until now. It was really entertaining. Thanks again for all of your stories.

easily one of best stories ive read on here!!!

this made me cum multiple times

would of been 100 if it didnt take three pages to get to what everyone truly wanted to read about

This is a great story. It was one the best ive read.

good story well written, enjoyed it thanks

expand the "cum scene" and itd be perfect

Your writing has the ability to describe both a woman's and man's erotic thoughts and feelings in a single story. So, both men and women can be erotically stimulated reading your stories. You seem to understand the female psyche quite well! To me, at least, most women authors seem to lack this dual dimension. They mainly write from the woman's perspective. You help me understand the male sensual mind quite effectively and I get very turned on by your stories. Keep um cumming.

Absolutely fantastic. I could come 70 times picturing this story and still read it again.

I loved it ,as I have the other few I,ve read ..How ever I,ve discovered a wonderful problem with your writing,That being; I,M not accomplishing any thing. seems I finish one & have 2 start another one, .Thank GOD i,m good at procrastination . LOL thank you 4 sharing These wonderfully erotic submissions (L4P)

Reading works like yours is something like the foreplay before the sex act and I couldn't read fast enough to get to the climax....and it was worth the wait!! But just like real sex, the time they spent on the bed fully making love was over too quickly. After the long tease, the actual sex was almost a quickie in comparison. So, I was a little bit disappointed. She could have given him lots more oral sex and he could have given her the same oral sex just to lengthen the time they spent together on that bed.

and I apologize for always thinking of the very few people that seem to want to denigrate your writing. So, this story apparently satisfied all of us. I liked the tale coming from the female lead, her point of view. It was a nice change of pace from other stories whose tale-teller was the unique male with monster cock and unlimited stamina and ability to bed any woman who dares come close to his writhing serpent. We all know about the constant lust that men have for women, even relatives, but this offered the growing lust that developed in the female mind - nice to see that lust is not one-sided and can be coupled with love as well. Since we don't expect that lust/love from most females we meet, it adds an erotic element that is difficult to ignore, especially when one's hand begins to rub one's cock. Thanks for making that an instinctive move!

Another story to your usual high standard, an excellent read

B

i wanna fuck my dad like this-make him mine.in stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

i thought it worked out great not to much sex not to little you know i like longer stories but this was still nice , thank you

great, a real ball drainer.

An automatic fiver! Your dialogue just fits the conditions to a T.

OHHHHHHHHHHHHH GOD i loved this story very very much. i would love to hear more about gabby and her daddy/husband. did he impragnate her? any way thank you for a beautiful love story.

...one of my favourite authors.

Too often I find writers on here are too anxious to get to the sex and forget about substance. It is refreshing; and I do sincerely enjoy reading such a well written story. It is nice to have more; than just - 'fuck me daddy' - to read.

I only wish there were more than five stars !!

xox

Kushi

NOW THIS THE PERFECT STORY I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THE ENDING YOU'VE GOT A WINNER HERE I GIVE YOU A SKY FULL OF STARS BUT SEEING THAN IT ONLY GOES TO 5 STARS YOU GOT FULL MARKS GREAT STORY,EVEN THOU

IT MAYBE FICTION THIS HAS HAPPENED MORE THAN YOU KNOW THIS IS A TRUE LOVE STORY AND I'M STILL HARD AND WILL BE FOR AWHILE WELL AT LEAST TIL I FINSH THIS COMMENT,THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST!!!!!!

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.................................R.......................................

I just discovered you maybe 3 hours ago and this is your third story I have read! its remarkable! 5 stars all around! You again have written a very well thought out and powerful story that makes the rest of the authors here awestruck! I hope you continue to write because it brings me great joy to read!

just wondering why you have not posted more?

I don't think so; try pulling out some of your own hairs with tweezers and see if you like it :-)

Otherwise, great story and deserves a sequel.

I like the way you write in the girls first person. I like father/daughter incest stories better than other stories about sex because I wish it could or would happen to me.

Loved it. I hope you continue with this story. They could move somewhere new, get married and have a bunch of babies. Please write a sequel.

What a beautiful story of love and passion.

I love when a gentle, handsome daddy knows how to teach and take a really good care of his daughter even he has separated with his wife. This kind of daddy needs to be exist in this world.

Havent read this in a while and had forgotten how much I loved it! I love the lack of conflict and smooth, easy flow, as well as daddy's acceptance. :)

I loved that they get married at the end 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Excellent! You had me at hello daddy!

You from here? Mmmmm love to see you

How? How do you continuously envision these erotica, beautiful, and loving stories?

How I envy you.

SO AROUSED BY THIS STORY MY PUSSY IS SEEPING THANK YOU X

Only one who has produced such an exquisite jewel can truly appreciate this story.

The care you take as a writer is so obvious and powerful. It nice to not have to deal with grammatical and spelling errors. Your stories carry living messages to your readership. Happy to be a fan. Mike

Jim,

Wow I really loved this story. The sense of connection and intimacy was powerful. Thank you for writing.

I have always love this story, I loved it so much that I made into one of my (few) I guess 20 is a few, hard cover books from this sight I always read this story along with Milky Maine Christmas, and Texas Refugees' Colleen, and My Christmas Wish (from another sight) a week before Christmas although I do read Gabriella's Daddy at lease once every two months and Colleen at leas once a month if not every two weeks. This is a very beautiful story and so are many others of Scouries stories. I would have liked to seen a sequel to this story, but I'm sure to many of you It would be too boring probably a story of a young wife married and having baby's at lease that is what I had always thought would happen between them.

There is nothing sexier than consensual seduction and sex between a girl and her daddy.

father-daughter love story! Wonderful and believable characterizations of both Dad and his beautiful daughter. An the use of a shared panty-fetish pulling them together was the icing on the cake! Looking forward to reading more of your stories, and sorry that you have stopped writing for some years. Thanx for the Really Great Read!

PaPaGolf414

You let us, your readers, down by not writing a second chapter.

what a great story you wrote.... I liked the fact that their love making and your writing did not sink to profanity... Hope to read more....

This was a great story, especially suited to a panty-fetish reader. It would have been nice to have had a sequel, but I guess that is not going to come after all this time. Well done, and thanx for the great read!

Holy moly, all of your stories are excellent!!!! I am binge reading you now. I am always left wishing for just a tad more of each story. That is how good you are. Do you write under any other names? Once I have read all your stories I am going to go through withdrawl. Thank you again!

Great story. I don't normally read long stories but this one had me mesmerized from the start. A truly written love story. I would love to see where they got married and how many children they had. GREAT WORK!!!

⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!

Great story!

OUTSTANDING!