All Comments on 'Gabrielle, My Christmas Angel'

by davepepperbury

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MetaBobMetaBobover 4 years ago
Very sweet!

Well-written, too ... nicely done!

NitpicNitpicover 3 years ago
Nice

Nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good Story

great story. Would have liked to see what happened with his bro & BF.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ok story a couple missing things. How about some karma on his betrayers. Seems like there a section in the middle that's missing or at least too brief. Plus, if she was such a good friend, how come there was no question about his life before. She just across as an un-carrying party girl.

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