All Comments on 'Gadarene'

Thank you. Your writing deserves wider recognition. I have no idea why Litreaders can't appreciate such a well-written story.

that only one other has commented on this amazing piece of writing. Even though the theme is dark, the writing is luminous. How wonderful to greet such an extraordinarily talented writer on this site. Please continue with your submissions. I, for one, am a dedicated fan.

I'm a sucker for fresh, gristly metaphor: "Donovan's was one tooth in a mouthful of buildings that jutted along what passed for main street in rural Indiana."

This author is a man who knows his way around vocabulary. I looked up "Gadarene." It means "headlong, precipitous...rash or helter-skelter." It originated in the bible, "from the demon-possessed Gadarene swine in Matthew 8:28 that rushed into the sea." You couldn't ask for a better title.

And how aptly the story captures the human condition. After all the desperate, filth and cum laden degradation, all the woman manages to achieve at the end is "Almost. Almost. Almost." This tale might almost qualify as Erotic Horror.

A must-read for serious Literotica writers.

This rings so true. And the writing is excellent.

Every now and then I find a wonderful story buried in LE. I enjoyed it immensely

Chilley

JUST FANTASTIC WRITING - A MAJOR TALENT FOUND IN A SEWER. MOVE OVER HUBERT SELBY JR