All Comments on 'Gaia's Maidens: Hilda'

by Grey_Lion_Short_Tales

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sad

1 fucking piss poor pic is illustrated? Pitiful. Check silkstocking lovers stories for real illustrated.

1 pathetic star

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Illustrated???

What part of “Illustrated Stories” don’t you understand?

Grey_Lion_Short_TalesGrey_Lion_Short_Talesover 5 years agoAuthor
Dear anonymous commenter

Calm the hell down, jackass…It was an honest mistake (first time upload), no need to harm my delicate itty-bitty feelings. I`ve submitted a change of category, so you can relax and pull the stick from your ass and I`ll sleep better knowing I used your immensely helpful feedback. Love and kisses,

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good one

Good story - enjoyed it and liked Hilda's characterisation

Actually thought that the one picture included was worth more than dozens of illustrations supplied in other stories.

But you've clearly offended one snowflake - oh well - never mind! Keep going

HM8485HM8485over 5 years ago
Novel story that I would definitely enjoy reading more of.

I hope this will become a Novel or Novella. Extremely well written save for a few typos. You set the scene so well, I didn't need any pictures -- elegant description without going overboard with trivia. A delicate and rare balance point! More please, and thank you for posting.

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