Gaia's Maidens: Hilda

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She ran her hands over it appreciatively and placed a kiss on the tip. She swiftly rose and did the same for his lips, before letting herself down from the stony seat.

She walked briskly in the direction they'd first met, to retrieve her nightshift. After all, it had been a very thoughtful present. After twenty or so steps she turned around, facing her big blue giant. He hadn't moved, still reclining peacefully in his rocky throne. The altar she'd been made a woman. His features were relaxed. Ramak raised a hand in greeting and smiled.

She smiled back and waved a quick goodbye. They both knew she'd be back soon, there was no doubt about that.

Hilda felt a fluttering thrill in her belly as she walked back, a definite spring in her step. I can't wait to go back. Maybe I should bring something next time?

She deftly picked up the shift where he'd taken it off her. It looked a hardly dirty from lying on the forest floor, perhaps a bit mossy, but otherwise it fine. No tears anywhere to be seen. She stuck her head through the main opening and put on the garment. The fabric felt uncomfortable, like it was unnatural to wear clothing.

After a short hike through the magically soothing trees she arrived at her family's home.

Where her grandmother sat on the bench outside the door. Moonlight illuminated her stern face. "Where were you?" she spoke softly, iron in her voice.

Hilda's voice stuck in her throat...She couldn't think of a single thing to say. How could she explain?

She became acutely aware of the drop of semen running down her inner thigh...

...To be continued...

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HM8485HM8485over 5 years ago
Novel story that I would definitely enjoy reading more of.

I hope this will become a Novel or Novella. Extremely well written save for a few typos. You set the scene so well, I didn't need any pictures -- elegant description without going overboard with trivia. A delicate and rare balance point! More please, and thank you for posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good one

Good story - enjoyed it and liked Hilda's characterisation

Actually thought that the one picture included was worth more than dozens of illustrations supplied in other stories.

But you've clearly offended one snowflake - oh well - never mind! Keep going

Grey_Lion_Short_TalesGrey_Lion_Short_Talesover 5 years agoAuthor
Dear anonymous commenter

Calm the hell down, jackass…It was an honest mistake (first time upload), no need to harm my delicate itty-bitty feelings. I`ve submitted a change of category, so you can relax and pull the stick from your ass and I`ll sleep better knowing I used your immensely helpful feedback. Love and kisses,

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Illustrated???

What part of “Illustrated Stories” don’t you understand?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sad

1 fucking piss poor pic is illustrated? Pitiful. Check silkstocking lovers stories for real illustrated.

1 pathetic star

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