All Comments on 'Gail's Adventure'

wowwwwwwwwwww my first of your stories but im off to read more, you have one sexy imagination suzie love the way the story built to a wonderful climax more suzie xx

and a beautiful build. Ty

This story was super hot! I hope there's more to come in the future. I've never posted a comment before but want to read more of this, so I felt I had to! Thanks for a great read!

I am certain there are many young studs out there facing the same problem. This story should be mandatory reading for them. Well-written and effective in conveying the young man's education and his teacher's satisfaction. Wow! To be 19 and have that happen, what a dream! To be hung would be nice, too! Thanks.

I wish you had written this, and your other wonderfully descriptive stories when I was that teen's age. The fortunate ones learn from older and truly sensual women, otherwise we miss out on the full and beautiful enjoyment of delicious intimacy. I also appreciate your technical writing finesse and excellent use of the language and grammar. It's a pleasure to read work by an author who really knows how to write.

Warmest regards and hugs.

So erotic and realistic and a great build up.

I loved the slow buildup, and the great dialog between Gail, Dena and Paul.

Loved it. Every word. Well done. Would be nice to hear more how attracted he was to her as much as she was to his cock. Would love to fuck Gail or any woman with her mindset. Thanks

The story recounts every man's daydreams! Good stuff.

A very good hook and a long, sexy, drawn out lead up to the sex scenes. Your descriptions of Gail's reluctance and acceptance, and her willingness to deflower a young man was accurate. The sex and Gail's inner thoughts were right on target (pardon the pun). A good story and a fun, sexy read. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for sharing.

Well told with lust and thought for both parties.

One of the best I've ever read. Very hot, I'll be reading more, I hope they are all this good!