All Comments on 'Galactic Bounty Hunter Ch. 01'

I look forward to reading the next chapter

I has my attention and i will reading along but please dont give up on Doc

Your new story is very good. I will keep following it.

PLEASE keep writing the DOC series! It is a fantastic story!!

don't give up on Doc Series either i can't wait to see how that story ends either

I don't know the Doc Series but this little snippet has made me a fan. I want more so much more. This is very very good.

Great start on a new series. I wasn’t sure where the Doc series was going and it seemed to stall a little.

You are one of the few writers I have read who know how to use prepositions such as in Chapter 1 Part 1 “with which they kept sticking us”. As you obviously already know, proper English grammar doesn’t allow a preposition to end a phrase or a sentence. Many, many writers break this rule.

I did find a few proofing errors though:

“Using a small amount my savings” should be “Using a small amount of my savings”.

“that I had to drop on him” should be “that I had the drop on him”.

“injured his what he thought” should be “injured as what he thought”.

“and their wanted” should be “and they’re wanted”.

This has mountains of promise and based on a great idea because there are so many possibilities for story direction. Even though it is not the most well written I think for me it is a must read! Thank you

I didn't had so much fun in ages , last time it was a Swen Hassel book ...

Hmm, not much action nor adventure. Left us hanging, and not even on a cliff. Hope the next chapter does a lot better. Semper Fi.

The real shame about this story is that I figured out that I’ve read it already. As I read each bit I remember it. So for a memory test if nothing else I’ll just have to re read the lot. 5*

It’s also great to see people posting under their accounts.

The writing and storyline was simple and straightforward. This was a "comfort food" type of story. Good work author.