All Comments on 'Galactic Slave Ch. 05'

This is good I have to say. I will look for more stories.

but it needs some editing...

all the (?)s were somewhat distracting.

Keep it up!

Maharat

i think it was great it was creative and mixed a good story with an arousing one

Thank you Master Dweaver for yet another excellent chapter. i really would like to read another chapter but as it is gone 1am i suppose i should be a good boy and go to bed.

I stumbled on this series about a year ago, and read the whole thing start to finish without stopping, I forgot to save it as a favourite and have spent time trying to search for it and finally found the right combination of search words tonight. this particular episode is one of my favourites. every one needs their own personal blob...dont suppose you can put this in a kindle book ;-)